LaymanLove's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trancebience 2]

HA!

I'm loving this man. I think ambient-trance should be a genre in itself. This is well composed, arranged, and mastered. I commend you on a piece well done!

Now I usually like to give some advice or at least a suggestion, but I really just want to sit back and enjoy this so forgive me...I'll hit you up on another one

Lata!

LL

[Silent Era]

Chills

This piece has chills...what that means, I don't know. But it's working. When I listen through the cheap midi sounds I can hear a well composed piece. You should invest some time into getting better sounds (unless of course this is what you want then I will F off, haha).

Actually, the strings are intriguing(sp?) but they could use some reverb and/or delay...That would add some "bigness" to this track. If you decide to remake it, let me know!

Come check some of my stuff out if you get a chance.

See ya,
LL

[pulse { part 1}]

ah HA!

Well I guess I listened to them backwards. You should shorten these builds and make it into one song!!!! Now it all makes sense...except, I'm curious as to why you made this concept a two part piece?

By itself, this part has even less movement than part two. It's quite repetitive, as it takes so long for new ideas to be introduced. Still liking what you're doing though, it definitely rides.

LL

FoxTechno responds:

cheers mate, third part tomoz, its one of those song that goes 10 mins long.
I think i should of made more stynth mellodys,

the third part goes right into a deep drop down, then slowly builds up.

the music system im using for this songs are an korg elecribe mx, and korg mini korg.

cheers for both reviews mate.

[pulse {part 2}]

a little more?

This beat has a real chill ambient feel to it, which I dig. I love all the cool doodads and delayed rhythm pieces you worked in there. Use of panning is on point. All I would ask for is a little more variety, something to bring this piece to life.

This would make for reeeeeally cool dvd menu music. As a song by itself it is not overly exciting. Still, I enjoyed it for it's quality and production value. What program(s) are you using?

See ya round,
LL

FoxTechno responds:

cheers again, ive left more information on the other review you did. part 3 is allready up. above this song.

thanks
dj dragon,.

[.Gone.]

lovin the vocals

I'm really enjoying this one. Good to hear some long flowing vocal harmonies. Well done. Autotune would help, but this has a very organic feel to it, and we wouldnt want to ruin that. I'm diggin the attitude of this track. Isn't MJ amazing? haha, late!

LL

Seypka responds:

I don't really beleive in using autotune even tho I have to use Pro tools in school! lol "Organic" was a nice way to put it, but I think u put it out there and that's it..all ability & no computer magic which Mj might know a little bit about.lol thanks dude. \m/

[Quintiple Q]

I'm chillaxin now

This little diddy is relaxing. Reminds me of the nice Sunday mornings I used to have before my life exploded into global bits of kharmic waste. Thanks!

WinTang responds:

Thank YOU!

[Jungle Trance]

not trance, but cool

Haha, this track is fun. Cool jungle sounds...bongos, steel drums, and is that a taiko? Sheeeeit man, this thing gets pretty random but I'm enjoying it.

This would go great in some jungle sacrifice ritual scene. Well, maybe too electronica for that, but this track has a place somewhere, haha. Keep being random and original and I'll keep coming back bro.

Peace

LL

ps...give my page a peek sometime!

[From Beyond]

Keep makin ambient!

I see you're going to production school. That's great man, I will probably end up doing the same in the near future. The quality of this mix shows you have some formal training...

I'm really enjoying the feeling this track gives me, it's unlike anything I can remember hearing. Good use of panning, although it's a little disorienting since the drums sound very dry. I love when the guitars kick in, well done Seypka (your last name rocks, haha).

There was only one thing that bothered me...the short quitar rhythm that develops as the rest of the quitars come in isn't on beat. It actually sounds like you played and recorded it so I guess it can't be quantized. No biggie.

Looking forward to your next ambient if you ever stroll back into that neck of the woods.

I have a pretty diverse collection of tracks and I'd love to hear what a student of production has to say about my quality of production.

Late

LL

[Foufa]

oooooooooo

This is pretty chill mayn. I'm feeling the little progression you got going here. And I'm begging you when I suggest this...put some delay and reverb on those drums so they and just as chill as the rest of the song.

There is so much more you could do with this song as you progress as a musician. Don't loose the song files...I better be seeing "Foufa [remix]" or something of the sort sometime in the future.

Peace

LL

shootingBLiND responds:

thanx a lot man, i need some good feedback like that to keep me going, cant wait to start working on more stuff